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Secret
Meanings: 3 Collections
The Man Who Spoke to Owls, David H.W. Grubb (112pp, Shearsman)
Telephone Ringing in the Labyrinth, Adrienne Rich (112pp, £10.99,
Norton)
Rooms,
Kerri Finlayson (84pp, £8.95, Shearsman)
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The
Man Who Spoke to Owls, by David HW Grubb, the latest in his prolific
career, is a collection shot through with religion, mining as it does his
Christian upbringing for imagery, rhythm and subject. This manifests itself
most often in the presence of angels, which feature heavily in the poems,
called up to represent emotions, places and causal influences, featuring as
metaphor 'Sunlight against the door like a stricken angel' ('Fire Sermons for
James Agee and Walker Evans') or as the protagonists of the poems.
His use of the supernatural, as well as his exact descriptions of time and
season, bring to mind the work of John Burnside, particularly the Burnside of
The Myth of The Twin. The collection exists in the same shadowy
in-between world of nature and spirit which Burnside traverses, but the voice
here is wilder. The sparse punctuation and long sentences give the impression
of being talked at by a mad, muttering voice, but one that is both eloquent
and captivating. This effect is augmented by the logic of the lines, at times
surreal or seemingly random: 'sometimes it is so cold it makes me think of
whales' ('Emily Dickinson and the Snow Days'), yet having the irrefutable
quality of gnomic utterances: 'Every silence has its own gardener' ('Every
Silence').
Although the voice is different, pieces such as 'The Colour of Angels' and
the sequence of Blue poems later in the collection, recall Wallace Steven's
use of colour:
the brown angel,
bark dark with slats of green
and eyes like
an early autumn morning
[...]
the exploding
parrot blue, the blue of the window that is not there
Secret meanings of nature, hidden things of the world, these are themes that
recur, and his description of 'The Blue Dogs of Albania' sums up the poems
nicely:
packs of them
dodging in and out of shades and shadows
and things
that have been, seeking the unexpected and hidden
and used, a
ghost here and a buried thing there
There were a couple of occasions when I had to pause to wonder if what seemed
to me a spelling mistake or grammatical error was due to the author or the
proof-reader. As nothing would have been lost by correction, I can only
conclude it was a proof-reading slip. A very minor quibble with an otherwise
highly enjoyable collection
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Telephone
Ringing in the Labyrinth by Adrienne Rich is, like Grubb's, sparsely
punctuated. However, unlike Grubb's, in which it served to heighten the manic
voice of the poems, here it seems rather to be a confidence in the rhythm
produced by language and the decision to allow the poems to do their work
with a minimum of punctuation.
An interplay of delicate lyrical lines work alongside tougher more
intellectual ones to produce the effect of a multi-faceted mind working
through ideas, sifting images and thoughts and presenting them in a fragmentary
fashion. This method of fragmentation and connection can at times seem
confusing, yet even when a line or whole poem is not easily comprehended,
there is still no doubt that a master of language is at work, and Rich is
willing to break from the complexity for moments of quiet: 'kite snarled in a
cloud / small plane melted in fog' ('Wallpaper') 'In the marine an allegro
creaking / boats on the tide / each with its own sway / rise and fall'
('Skelton Key').
The abiding theme of this collection is of loss, and there is certainly an
end-of-days feel to some of the pieces: 'In a desert observatory, under
plaster dust, smashed lenses / left by the bombardments, // star maps
crackle, unscrolling.' The Bush regime recurs, though never named, as a
symbol of lost hope. A quote from Dick Cheney concerning working 'the dark
side' sparks off one of the most powerful poems in the collection, in which
'tears down carven / cheeks track rivulets in the scars / left by the gouging
tool / where wood itself is weeping' and 'truth scrubs around the pedestal of
the toilet'. Telephone Ringing in the Labyrinth is a
collection that needs experiencing over time, and the shattered nature of the
poems will leave lines sparking through your inner-ear.
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Rooms, by Kerri
Finlayson is the most cohesive of the three collections, linked as it is by
two stories running in parallel: a young women becoming involved in film, and
the development of film itself. Perhaps paradoxically for a collection
concerning image, language itself is often in the foreground.
From the opening poem, 'Cave Painting', Finlayson is playing with the
etymology of the word camera: 'Pictures about words / Words about pictures /
Stanza about camera / Rooms about rooms.' Scientific terminology is also put
to good use: 'proximal heat' ('First Cut') 'Shucked geometrice' ('Hypatias')
'Atoms self sew to new shape. / A polytomic ion finding balance as plastic.'
This last quote taken from 'The Epistemology of Nitrate', in which short
fragments, some new, some recurring lines from earlier poems, are arranged on
the page in the shape of chemical diagrams and this is not the only
'concrete' poem in the collection.
The writing is rich and words are weighed with care. Often, short lines draw
attention to the building blocks of the poems:
To prevent a
blur
insert a
blink
['Persistence of Vision']
and Finlayson is willing to play around with styles for effect, for example
using the language of a screenplay in the poem 'Rough Cut' to distance the reader
from the emotive subject of a father beating his daughter: 'Cut to: / His
belt: / Splitting seams.' of course, as the poet intended, this distancing
and stark approach leaves all the more for the imagination to fill in, thus
heightening the effect and producing a subtle but devastating poem.
On the whole, and despite the many positives, this was my least favourite
collection of the three, with a couple of poems feeling less complete than
the others. But this is only to be expected from a debut collection,
especially when compared to the long-standing work of Rich or Grubb and I
will certainly be keeping an eye out for this writer in the future.
© Ben
Parker 2009
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